Chapter 25: The Discussion
Chapter 25: The DiscussionTranslator: Nyoi-Bo StudioEditor: Nyoi-Bo Studio
The financial capital within reach that they could squander was pitifully small, and so they had to wrack their brains. Their card play couldn't be very long, but it had to draw people in, which as far as Copper was concerned was a rather difficult challenge. He wrote and he wrote, and he revised and he revised.
Although he hadn't started the work of card making, Chen Mu hadn't let up either, as he was already making all kinds of changes to the design in his head. Although the card play wouldn't be complex, increasing its expressive power was still a knotty problem. Their biggest problem was that they didn't have any spare money handy for him to experiment.
Which is to say that Chen Mu needed to reduce the frequency of failed attempts, to reduce the costs of production. His interest in reducing costs very clearly far surpassed what of any of those who had knowledge about high-level cards would be eager for. For those two poor wretches, the costs of production were life.
Copper's script was finally finished just on the day that the Star Academy exchange delegation arrived at Eastern Wei Academy. So, when all the people of Eastern Shang-Wei City were emptying its streets to take a look at the majestic Star Academy from among the six great academies, Chen Mu and Copper were shut up in the room discussing the script.
The two had opened up a rather animated discussion.
Chen Mu wanted Copper to tell him in detail what results he hoped to achieve point by point, such as the lighting angles, the background, the clothing, the characters' expressions at such and such a time, among many examples.
The more Chen Mu asked, the more concrete he became, and the more detailed, getting into things that Copper had overlooked, and which he brought up. Copper had never engaged in that kind of battle, which made him fret no end. But he also knew that for Chen Mu to economize, he must be detailed and complete.
Across two weeks, the two were in discussion the whole time. Where the original script had just a few thin pages of screenplay, they had piled on a thick pad of rough drafts. It was full of the written results of the two discussing for two weeks.
The two of them had bloodshot eyes, while their spirits still seemed pretty good.
After two weeks of discussion, Chen Mu had the entire story cooked into his core. Not only that, but he had nearly every scene – and every detail in every scene – already clear in his mind.
What they needed just then was not to get right to work, but to get some rest.
The two of them slept through two days and two nights.
The two soundly sleeping people didn't know that while they were shut-in discussing, the exchange delegation from Star Academy had already moved in to Eastern Wei Academy. Star Academy's exchange activity, which granted inconceivable prestige, got the attention of the entire Heavenly Federation. And what had originally been confined to the exchange activities between Star Academy and the Eastern Wei Academy, had already become a grand occasion for all Eastern Shang-Wei City.
Wang Ze was the student representative from the Star Academy. He was very thin and tall, having a long face with somewhat sunken eyes, which were extremely penetrating. He was a third-year student from the external academy of the Star Academy. At Star Academy, if a student from the external academy hadn't gained entry to the inner academy, they could graduate in four years. Although Wang Ze, who was to become a card artisan, had strengths which tended toward the ordinary, he was worldly and well-informed on the human/machine interface, so the school appointed him to be the student representative that time.
You could see that Star Academy was placing a lot of importance on the exchange activity. Apart from forth-year students who were preparing for their graduation exams, there were all sorts of other third-year students, among whom were quite a few aces.
The responsible student on the Eastern Wei Academy side was Zuo Tingyi.
"Has fellow-student Wang gotten used to being here?" Seeing Wang Ze, Zuo Tingyi politely asked how he was doing. Theirs was a basically student-organized exchange delegation, expecting to be there for two months. The two schools didn't make any hard demands on the students, who could pretty much do as they pleased.
Wang Ze really appreciated his urbane junior colleague from Eastern Wei Academy. Wang Ze came from a distinguished family, and so he had a good feeling about the style which Zuo Tingyi exuded. "May I trouble my junior colleague? Your distinguished school's consideration in looking after us so meticulously makes me afraid that when we return to our school we will no longer be at home."
"My fellow student is too generous. Oh, there will be several students from your honorable school who will participate in the field work organized by the third year "F" section. Given that, I'm afraid we won't have enough supervising teachers." Zuo Tingyi said a little bit hesitantly.
The Heavenly Federation had five large flourishing districts, twenty-two ordinary residential districts, plus the capital, making twenty-eight altogether. Those twenty-eight districts didn't share a border among them, and nearly every district was independent of the others. Using the Eastern Reaches District in which Eastern Shang-Wei City was situated as an example, beyond it was all unbroken forest, which was the most ancient and wild area. That was the realm of other kinds of life, which were in control of it. They were powerful, deadly dangerous, and extremely populous. In the history of the establishment of the Heavenly Federation, the opening up of each district was established on the blood of uncounted ancestors.
Outside the Heavenly Federation was all wilderness, which included a dense ancient forest, a dry Gobi desert, and ranks of cloud-piercing mountains. But what would it be like if you were to go through the wilderness, enter the forests, cross the deserts, or climb the mountains, walking ever outward? No one knows, since every year there might be countless explorers who go out, but so far no one had returned.
There were really too many dangers in the open country. There were countless varieties of huge and strong creatures – pets of nature – that even the very top card artisans of all mankind couldn't contend with.
But the open country was also a treasure-trove, with rich produce and those precious fur pelts from the wild beasts, which were all sufficient to cause greedy mankind to rush in headlong regardless of danger. Practically all the materials needed to make the high-grade cards which were so incomparably precious in peoples' eyes, came from the dangerous open country. They came from the bodies of powerful and huge creatures caught there.
And then there was the discovery of the transit windows and the ash stratum which caused all of the Heavenly Federation to go into a period of mad exploration. It was in the year 2910 that mankind discovered the first transit window in the open country, and soon thereafter the related ash stratum was discovered. The transit window was the entrance to the road which connects to other regions. The ash stratum was then the underground passage which connected two transit windows. It was said that there was a world dripping with ash in the ash stratum, which was how it got its name. Immediately thereafter the first new realm was discovered, which was the current Mohadi Realm. The one who discovered it – Yang Sen – was successful, and gained honor and wealth.
The Heavenly Federation publicized the exploration activities and allowed private exploration. After searching out a new realm, the private explorer could achieve a lot of rights, such as being able to earn a stake in tax revenue when two parties entered into commercial trade. Or the discoverer could achieve trade priority and other similar sorts of priority, although the priorities couldn't develop so far as the transfer or selling of ownership. When the policies went into effect, several consortiums invested in expeditionary teams, like mushrooms popping up after the rain. And ever since then, card artisans followed on the development of card theory, leading to more and more martial power manifesting itself, with talent showing up in other martial careers as well, making it the number one profession. And then society's need for more card artisans stimulated still more rapid development of card theory.
The outer reaches had become the heaven for numberless risk takers, while in the same way becoming the hell for numberless other risk takers who were buried there.
Chapters
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Chapter 1
- Making a Living from Cards
Chapter 2
- Mysterious Cards
Chapter 3
- Training Class
Chapter 4
- Zuo Tingyi
Chapter 5
- A Weird One-star Power-card
Chapter 6
- Perception
Chapter 7
- Card Variations
Chapter 8
- A Predicament
Chapter 9
- Making Contact
Chapter 10
- An Enigma
Chapter 11
- Healthy Exercise
Chapter 12
- Copper
Chapter 13
- What Sort of Card is this Anyhow
Chapter 14
- Going Mad
Chapter 15
- Fantasy Card Advertising
Chapter 16
- News
Chapter 17
- A Late Billboard
Chapter 18
- Coppers Grievance
Chapter 19
- As Soon as You Get Up Make a Card Show
Chapter 20
- And What is Card Play
Chapter 21
- Allah Gong
Chapter 22
- The Little Slacker has a Lot of Power 1
Chapter 23
- The Little Slacker has a Lot of Power 2
Chapter 24
- The Little Slacker has a Lot of Power 3
Chapter 25
- The Discussion
Chapter 26
- The First Card Play 1
Chapter 27
- The First Card Play 2
Chapter 28
- The First Card Play 3
Chapter 29
- Grand Revelations 1
Chapter 30
- Grand Revelations 2
Chapter 31
- Grand Revelations 3
Chapter 32
- Grand Revelations 4
Chapter 33
- A Conjecture
Chapter 34
- A New Plan
Chapter 35
- The Master Shi Card-Play
Chapter 36
- A Former Enemy
Chapter 37
- Wounded
Chapter 38
- Coppers Conjecture
Chapter 39
- The Twelve-Card Simple Water World
Chapter 40
- Enjoying Agony
Chapter 41
- A Few Seconds Every Hour
Chapter 42
- The Low-Grade Fantasy Card Club
Chapter 43
- Low-Grade
Chapter 44
- A New Discovery
Chapter 45
- The Unwinding Game
Chapter 46
- Star Academy Centennial
Chapter 47
- Go Ahead
Chapter 48
- Point Sweeps
Chapter 49
- Bai Zheyuan
Chapter 50
- An Invitation
Chapter 51
- The Tailless Shuttle Card
Chapter 52
- Glittering Shuttle Moves
Chapter 53
- Mei Da
Chapter 54
- Coppers Good News
Chapter 55
- Interactive Meetings
Chapter 56
- Surrounded by Peaks on a Winding Road
Chapter 57
- Chen Mus Proposal
Chapter 58
- A Mishap
Chapter 59
- Swordfish Challenge
Chapter 60
- Have You Started
Chapter 61
- Fly in the Sky and Escape through the Ground
Chapter 62
- The Ways of the Shuttle
Chapter 63
- Demons Demons
Chapter 64
- Weird
Chapter 65
- Taking Care of Business
Chapter 66
- The Investigation
Chapter 67
- Entering the City
Chapter 68
- About Killing People
Chapter 69
- No Choice
Chapter 70
- Secret Weapon
Chapter 71
- Fear Looking Back
Chapter 72
- The Sign of the Nouveaux Riche
Chapter 73
- The Seductresses
Chapter 74
- In an Emergency
Chapter 75
- During a Read
Chapter 76
- Lin Jiu
Chapter 77
- Fright
Chapter 78
- News So Astonishing
Chapter 79
- A Bitter Battle
Chapter 80
- Poverty is Just a Word
Chapter 81
- Profiteer
Chapter 82
- The Way of Wealth
Chapter 83
- The Mud Fish Jet-Stream Card
Chapter 84
- A Perfect Replica
Chapter 85
- The Fiery Mayfly
Chapter 86
- Dual Compostion
Chapter 87
- Eight Million
Chapter 88
- A Gloomy Hong Tao
Chapter 89
- Rays of Light and a Warning
Chapter 90
- The Slightest Difference
Chapter 91
- To Meet
Chapter 92
- Fishing in Turbid Water
Chapter 93
- The Ning Household
Chapter 94
- The Will to Fight
Chapter 95
- Cruel Reality
Chapter 96
- Perception
Chapter 97
- Breakthrough
Chapter 98
- The Swordfishs Reward
Chapter 99
- Sensitivity of Perception
Chapter 100
- The Raining Shuttles Card
Chapter 101
- The Old Line of Work
Chapter 102
- The Fame of the Raining Shuttles
Chapter 103
- Cooperation
Chapter 104
- Raining Shuttles Card
Chapter 105
- The Big Mudfish
Chapter 106
- Black and White Chrysanthemum Rock
Chapter 107
- Strike When the Iron is Hot
Chapter 108
- Problems
Chapter 109
- Bo Wen
Chapter 110
- Breath Control
Chapter 111
- The Rose Cheng Ying
Chapter 112
- Commissions
Chapter 113
- The Bipolar Thunderball Card
Chapter 114
- Verification
Chapter 115
- Deep Variations
Chapter 116
- The Little Company of Five
Chapter 117
- The Hundred Blades
Chapter 118
- Three Moons
Chapter 119
- Mark Victor
Chapter 120
- What a Freak
Chapter 121
- Weak Water
Chapter 122
- Mark Victors Twisted Spinning Thorns
Chapter 123
- The Great Mark Victor
Chapter 124
- Breath Control
Chapter 125
- Turning a Weapon Against Oneself
Chapter 126
- Resistance Training
Chapter 127
- Good Cards and Good Pens
Chapter 128
- The Night of the Cross
Chapter 129
- The Best Breath Control
Chapter 130
- The Best Breath Control II
Chapter 131
- The Best Breath Control III
Chapter 132
- The Best Breath Control IV
Chapter 133
- The Best Breath Control V
Chapter 134
- Bo Wens Promise
Chapter 135
- The Dangerous Jungle
Chapter 136
- Good Character is Really Good
Chapter 137
- Three People and a Beast
Chapter 138
- A Three Person Pact
Chapter 139
- Card Artisan Not Me
Chapter 140
- Li Duhong
Chapter 141
- Head to Head
Chapter 142
- The Brilliant Ape
Chapter 143
- A Bitter Battle
Chapter 144
- The Amazing Tailless Shuttle
Chapter 145
- Pursuit
Chapter 146
- A Gifted Composition I
Chapter 147
- A Gifted Composition II
Chapter 148
- To Be Alone is also To Be Somewhere
Chapter 149
- Alfonso
Chapter 150
- The Bet
Chapter 151
- Wei-ah
Chapter 152
- The Banquet
Chapter 153
- The Challenge
Chapter 154
- Give it a Try
Chapter 155
- How Many Points Teacher
Chapter 156
- The House of Chen Lab
Chapter 157
- Wei-ahs Dedication
Chapter 158
- The Gummy Cloud
Chapter 159
- The Conduct of a Defeated Family
Chapter 160
- Im Ugly and Im not Gentle
Chapter 161
- The Blue Moon Gun
Chapter 162
- The Fifth Unit
Chapter 163
- Toughing it Out
Chapter 164
- What Kitt Entrusted
Chapter 165
- The Big Bug
Chapter 166
- Chen Mus Proposal
Chapter 167
- The Good and the Bad
Chapter 168
- The Thoughts of Xi Weide
Chapter 169
- The Discovery
Chapter 170
- What is This
Chapter 171
- Both Students are Excellent so Which One Shines
Chapter 172
- Misfortune
Chapter 173
- A Stroke of Luck
Chapter 174
- A Slight Change
Chapter 175
- Alfonsos Kind Intentions
Chapter 176
- Preparation
Chapter 177
- The Encounter
Chapter 178
- The Scheme
Chapter 179
- What Does He Want to Do
Chapter 180
- The Calculation
Chapter 181
- Three People
Chapter 182
- Night Fighting
Chapter 183
- Chaos
Chapter 184
- Pomelo
Chapter 185
- What Will it Be
Chapter 186
- The Bosss Fantasy Card
Chapter 187
- Butchie
Chapter 188
- The Unexpected Acquisition
Chapter 189
- Wei-ah Style Training
Chapter 190
- Why Did They Come
Chapter 191
- A Bold Idea
Chapter 192
- The Murderous Aura
Chapter 193
- A Fierce Battle
Chapter 194
- Worries
Chapter 195
- Wei-ahs Advice
Chapter 196
- A Signal
Chapter 197
- Prologue
Chapter 198
- The Fuse
Chapter 199
- A Chaotic Battle
Chapter 200
- Degeneration
Chapter 201
- Looking Up in the Dark
Chapter 202
- Are You Getting Sprung Too
Chapter 203
- Goldfish
Chapter 204
- The Rescue
Chapter 205
- Medical Card Artisans
Chapter 206
- Sue Lochiro
Chapter 207
- Ren Wenzhous Counterattack
Chapter 208
- Just Do It
Chapter 209
- The Sound Beam Card
Chapter 210
- The Fantasy Card Advertisement I
Chapter 211
- The Fantasy Card Advertisement II
Chapter 212
- The Fantasy Card Advertisement III